Monday, 29 December 2014

Long Time Coming

Long Time Coming
Review: Edie Claire's Long Time Coming

Genre: Romance, Suspense


This is a superb romance, with a depth and complexity far beyond the average. Edie Claire's story sucks the reader in like quicksand. When the climax arrives, there is no longer any hope of extricating oneself until 'The End'. Suspense is delivered by the bucket-load as Joy Hudson tries to uncover the critical events of the past, and the plot has some very clever twists, beautifully prepared and executed. It is also, in part, a good ghost story.

The characters are really well done, rounded, fully alive and very plausible. Jeff Bradford is a great leading man, attractive and very eligible without - quite - being too over-the-top. Joy is full of angst, but under the circumstances it couldn't be any other way. Her situation explains her nature, and her struggles with history, memory and guilt. Her family, and other town characters, are people I might know. Bear (the dog) is both adorable and essential. In contrast with many books in the romance genre, this one does not skimp on the peripheral characters.

Eighteen years after the critical events Joy comes back to her home town as a qualified veterinarian, planning to set up her own practice. It soon becomes clear that she holds Jeff responsible for her best friend Jenny's death, but the truth of what actually happened is shrouded in the mists of memory and silence. Joy can't remember the details, and some people have never told what they know about it. When Joy has to treat Jeff's dog Bear for a serious injury, they are thrown together more often, on top of how attracted she feels to him, even though she doesn't want to be.

Without revealing too much, this is a kind of love triangle with a twist. A large part of the suspense is how it all works out. Certainly there were times when I wanted to slap Joy and shout - I'm pretty sure I did shout out loud at my ebook reader! - "Come on, can't you see it?" But good authors in this genre take care that the reader always knows or understands just a little more than the protagonist, and feeling like this is a part of the pleasure. And Edie Claire knows exactly what she's doing.



I have no reservations in giving this five stars. If you like a good romance, this is an absolute must-read!



P.S. I know, this is not Indie. But it's just too good not to review here!

Friday, 12 December 2014

30 Days - Review

Review: K. Larsen's 30 Days
30 Days

Genre: Romance, Adult*, Suspense

*Adult: Well, yes, but only just. It has some sex scenes in it, but personally I wouldn't describe them as pornographic.

This is cleverly constructed and quite well written, which makes it a really good story. Elle is in a bad situation: her sister Jenny is dead, which means she's lost her best friend. Her abusive husband Ryan has driven her to try to kill herself, and she finds herself on suicide watch in the mental health section of the hospital. Therapy has helped her towards recovery, but now Ryan is trying to use her 'incapacity' to gain control of her inheritance, and of her, for the rest of her life. It's time for Elle to make a bid for freedom, and to get her own life back. With a list of 30 things Jenny would have challenged her to do, Elle sets out on her personal journey to self-determination, only to be ambushed by a superlatively attractive Colin, and friends.

Elle's history and background is sketched in by Larsen's expert use of flashbacks, which fade away as they complete their task. Larsen's characterization is a little weak, especially of secondary characters. Elle's friends are all wonderful and the bad guys are awful. Elle herself, however, is well done. At 55k words it's not a long novel. The writing style is easy to read and the story flows well - and the book has the great advantage of being available for free. I don't know how long that will be the case, but I suspect that Larsen is using this as a free taster for several other books and particularly the sequel to this one, Committed ($4.99 when I looked and probably worth that). This story does end on something of a cliffhanger, but I did not feel cheated by that because I could guess where things were going, at least in a general way. I'm sure that Larsen has some plot complications, and entertainments, contained in Committed, but I have not yet read that one.

Overall I would say this is not great literature, but then it was never intended to be. It is very good entertainment, well executed. As a light read, I can highly recommend it.

I obtained this ebook as a free download. This review is entirely unsolicited and reflects my objective opinion.